Posted in Dear grade 6 students
Please write an imaginary story happened to you one day — You may use the following words to help you
Once Upon a time,
Monster
Cupboard
Jungle
Windows
Trick
Cave
Electricity
Closed
Microwave
Slipped
Key
Power
I hid behind a tree
Afraid
Scared
Worry
So saw
Trap
Knife
Suddenly
Behind him
Tent
Camp
Kitchen
monester 22-1-2013
Monster in the house
Once upon a time there was a monster in a little house and a little boy. The monster was evil and his face like a devil. He was looking for the boy in about a year in this creepy house. The boy all the time when he sees the monster he be scared and the monster don’t know. One day the boy decided to not run from the monster. He went to the kitchen then he went to the drawer and he takes a knife and his father’s gun of course and some bullet’s to kill the monster. He put the bullets in the gun. He went to the monster face to face and boom the boy shot the monster in his head and he said: {headshot}. Then he knife him up to be sure that the monster is dead.
THE END
Monster House
In a day, i was alone at my house I was 10 years old, the telephones
Are not working i tired to fix it but suddenly, the electricity turned off, I saw
a shadow moving and the door locked , I saw a monster near me , I ran
Away i was trying to find a solution but I found it, I tried to turn on the electricity, I stand I hear sounds and a shadow moving again I saw the monster again but the monster was trying to scare me but he scared he’s
Self, the electricity turn on again and the doors opened again but the
phone was ringing I answered I hear BOO But that was my brother then I heard someone saying to me: wake up wake but that was my father and he said : we returned from the market I said: Oh the was bad dream.
dark night
once upon a time, I and my friend khalil went to al ain , when we arrived we played by our bikes , when we got back home we found a monster and every window and door was closed , so I and friend khalil hide in the basment, and we was thinking about a plan , we went to the kichen and we got knifes we stab the the monster and we killed hem then we woke up and the weirdest thing the we dreamed the same dream. the end
Abdullah Almehri
Thank you
First you should write your name in English
Second
care about the following
hid in the past
hide in the present
we were not we was
knives not knifes
we killed him not hem
thank you very much you always the first
Mohamad Alrumaithy
Thank you very much
You always impress me
care about the following please
One day not in a day
i tried to fix them not it
the door was locked
he scared himself
oh it was a bad dream!
Rashed Jamal
You are always the best
he was scared not he be scared
the boy decided not to run
Thank you very much
once upon a time there were one boy his name was john he has a dirty house with his mother .in the night his mother went to the mall and john stay in the house he found monster in the kitchen he run away to his friend house he call the police came and the killed the monster and they called john mother she came and she take john to the mall the end
Mohammad Abdullah Alnaqbi
You are a wonderful student
but please
you are writing a narrative
so divide your story into paragraphs and into sentences
very important