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Dear Grade 9 studentsGood work my students — I am really happy of what you are doing in the second trimester -Hope you go on to have a great successDear Students read the model story of the death car then write your own oneRemember the story should full of actions and imaginationEnjoy Reading the Story
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The Death Wedding !
Once upon a time , there were two teenagers who felt in love with each other , they talked to each other every day until they sleep .
The boy was named Jack , and the girl was named Scarlet .. They were a very nice Couple.
They LOVED each other so much , and they were comfortable with each other , and stayed the same for 10 years
Thank you Khalifa
Very nice story
in valentine snowy day at February mike and his valentine was going to have romantic night in a bad weather day.
while they are in the way the weather became worst and worst but mike didn’t care because He resolved to spend a fun night. While they were a kilometer from their destination mike became afraid and decided to go back home But he could not go home because of the bad weather. suddenly the engine of the car has stopped and the two of them became to Shivering from the fear. suddenly a cop passed beside them and they stared to waving their hands so the cops can see them and indeed the cops saw them and they sent them back to home.
after that accident mike Determination not to go out when the weather is bad.
One dark evening, I was walking home from a soccer game near the graveyard. I was excited that my team won. I heard a spooky sound… it sounded so evil. At this time, many people were near the cemetery so I just ran away to my house. The next day I came back with my friend to investigate the sound. We were walking through the cemetery keeping a close eye to suspicious activity. I was thinking of scaring my friend by saying that it was a ghost but I didn’t. After a while we sat down from exhaustion of seeing nothing but graves. But I got this icy cold feeling that I was being watched or someone was behind me. I turned to see a white shadowy figure. For a moment I was stunned but then it disappeared without a trace. I blinked with disbelief but noticed I was the only one who saw it. I kept it as my little secret till I could get more clues to confirm it was a ghost. But I shook my head and grabbed my friend and ran out as fast as I could. On the next day I came to see if it came again. But I couldn’t get in because the secretary didn’t let me go in the graveyard. But I was smiling inside that everybody has to go to the graveyard when they die. So I was thinking to scare the secretary by throwing something at him and running home. But I didn’t do it because I am a nice boy
once upon a time there was two cars this cars is very very speed . the speed bring a accedants this cars doing a accedant and the driver was died this is end of speed
once upon time, we were going to Dubai and we were so happy.
So my brother was the driver, my brother was loking to the blackberry suddnley we make accident with a car and we can’t continue our Flight to Dubai so we go back to our home and we were so sad.
one sabons time , the loved is not good for the smail boy and with each other and stayed ounce upon a time and the girl was named Scarlet They were a very nice Couple The boy was named Jack in love with each other , and stayed the same for 1100 years
I GO TO SPACE TO ENJOY
I NEED TO GO TO SPACE
THE TERRIBLE ACCIDENT
Enjoy Reading the Story
The Death Wedding !
Once upon a time , there were two teenagers who felt in love with each other , they talked to each other every day until they sleep .
The boy was named Jack , and the girl was named Scarlet .. They were a very nice Couple.
They LOVED each other so much , and they were comfortable with each other , and stayed the same for 10 years
once upon a time there is boy and girl,the boy name is ahmed
Once upon a time , there were three frinds .
they stot front the signal , wen the green open , they move to the anther side .
but there was car was driving fast it support same one form this finds.
the Terrible accident ..
once upon time there was a man who was walking in the street, and saw a beautiful girl and he want to married her.
after 2 years they have married, after that they decided to travel to spain and when they finish puting their stuuf, and go to the air plane, they enter the plane they where very happy, when the plain starts to fly the plain engines breakdown and the plain have fall from the sky to the ground and all the people died .
once upon time there was two frind they was gowing to trip in the forest by there car when they was gowing the car stop and they want some man to fixed the car and they was in far area
once upon a time AHMED drive the car fast to Up to the hospital sudenlly Burst frame and the cAR Flipped And was wounded in the head and a broken hand Contact a passer-by in the street for the ambulance to help him and rushed to hospital ,naxt day
A scary Night
Once upon a time, there was a 2 friends who love each other and they like to go out with each other always, their names are Scott and Steve
One day, they were in Scott’s Car and scott was driving Fast, and that night was raining ! but he didn’t care.
then suddenly the wheels of the vehicle exploded.
The car Overturned and were damaged, Steve woke up then he saw something scary! it was Scott’s Body, it was full of glass , he went crying then he called the police and he went to home sad
onec upon a time,there was 2 brother was going to Dubai to saw the khlifa towe, in there way they did accident but no body injured the police came and the road stopped and after days they fixed the car.
the party
Once upon a time there was a guy name was mike he was celebration his 21 year old by doing the party after 1 day when he was making the party he was hit by the car the guy who kill mike he was drunk
in the last they capture the drunk guy and then they extetuted
Once upon a time therw was a family who love to advanture
One Day they thought about going to a mountin By a car
soo the packed up there stuff and start driving
But the the forget to facin there seat bealt
After 3hours the Car driver Had an accidents
and Die!!!
Amazingly no one was killed when a Chicago bus driver passed out at the wheel yesterday and plowed into at least 20 cars and a laundromat, CBS Chicago reports. “Literally looked like a scene out of a movie,” said a tow truck driver who estimated the damage at over $250,000. Residents rushed outside to witness the wreckage at the 2800 block of North Kedzie Avenue, where cars were piled on top of each other and a laundromat wall was damaged.
“I’m just more grateful for my life,” said the owner of a damaged car. “A car you can always get back.” Only the driver and a bus passenger were reported injured, and both were hospitalized in fair-to-serious condition, DNAInfo reports; a medical emergency was said to cause the driver’s blackout. Incredibly, it wasn’t the only bus-gone-wild story this month: A 12-year-old girl in Lake Elmo, Minn., stopped a bus full of school kids by pressing her hand on the brake after the driver lost consciousness, reports CBS Minnesota.
I was told that I am lucky. I am actually more than lucky. I amazed many people by walking out of my minivan, with a child in my arms. To this day, I can sit here and think about the events of that day and it makes my head spin.
December 17, 2006, my family and I were headed to the mall to get my youngest child a birthday present as well as to see Santa since Christmas was only days away. We never made it there. As we were heading south, a car was heading north and a Toys R Us tractor trailer was behind him. As they got closer to us, the tractor trailer rear ended the car and pushed him head on into us at about 55 mph. We never saw it coming. I am kind of glad of that.
once spon time there was 2 cars
we was racing in top of the mountains it was very hard
and danger there was a strong tern my freind flyed the car
and me allso he teurn on the booost and my freind damaged
up of a school bus full of childerns and was save and i won.
thankyou…….
ahmed abdullah
9-4
once upon a time there are a family this family was big they 45 person then they rent bus to go to travile to another city .
then one 6 wheel damge left him then they hute the barrier and turned then the police and Ambulance came to Take them to the hospital then all of them die They bled so much.
once upon time, there is a bus there is many people in it, and then one train was come and across it and many people was dead , and the emergnsy was came to take them .
once upon time, there is a bus there is many people in it, and then one train was come and across it and many people was dead and the emergnsy was came to take them. thank you
in a big desert there was a family camping they had a moter cyle they liked to play witrh that so the boat the keys and started clamping there was a clif one of the boys called hamad dare is cousin wich is called essa to get to the top of the clif so he speed his motor ana climed up and he won the dare when he get done i faces a tree he pushed a brake but the sand moved him and the motor had burned up and hamad burnd also and died .
Once upon a time , there were tow friends abood and salem they deside to went yas water world when they was in the way salem driver was new and he dident drive very well and they habbend to them accident and police come they go hospital and every is without casualities
drifted off to sleep for a short moment and jolted back into consciousness. The darkening sky is tranquil and soft, and I find it beautiful to watch the last glimpses of mauve and crimson sink below the horizon beyond the soft, rolling mountains
once upon atime there was two boy one his name hamdan and khlifa he go to the mall then he go pacinc sudunlly he want to go to the home then car come crash him then hamden dye then khlifa cry because his brother hamdan dye khlifa he love hamdan more then he carried him to the grave
finsh
one upon a time
there was a two mans ali and abdulaziz
thay went to the has farm
ali say for abdulaziz i want make reas with you
abdulaziz say ok
want ali make the race his tair brike and the car was brike and die ali *___#
once upona time there was two kids they loved climbing. And all the time sam and alex climb anything like trees and cabet but there mum have phobia from high places then the kids decided to go to a mountain climbing picnic at the first time the mother felt sceared but then she knew that the kids dream is to go climbing mountain one day so she said to them so they get started to get ready for that trip . the children felt so happy because there dream will be true . when they arrived the wether turned black and cloudy and its start raining so they came back again to home hoaping that they can do a climbing mountain one daty
thank you
once upon time , there was a family who love travel by car
one day they decided to go oman , put the father say” i didnt sleep good last night” the mother say oman not so far”. and they stop on petrol station . omr by water and some dirnks, after that they go to oman put on the road all sleep on the road they make accident an they die.
car accident
one day ther was two car was drfting in the stret after ten munite ther are truck coming then he crash the frest car then the scond car then the two man day and the truck turned over the the man day
the end
once upona time there one kid went to the street thene one taxi came so fast and he bumbed the kid the taxi ran way then he cool the bolice the bolice wint to the crime place he takes car print to know the harami he know the man he accedent he now the man he bumbed the kids aftar he take the kids to hospital
once upon a time there was two boys walking
they saw an bike old one but it has two seats so they went to there mothers and got money from them…… after a while
they started to go to the park the bike was good but after an 30 minutes the bike started to go in the street direaction
the boys were scared to death sadly they pumbed with a car wich the result was there dead
once upon atime there was two car was drifting ahmed and ali ,ahmed have a big car and ali have a small car they was racing ali win but hi didnt see whtat is front him then he crash aboy then he go to gail
once upon a time they were a boy and girl named salem and kaytlin and they were a nice couple salem loved her from very long time and she know that but she was taken it as a friendship only not more or little one day salem decided to confessed his love to her and he was soo exciting so he told her that they will have a dinner together and both of them arrived to the caffe and after amoments salem told her i love you and an earthquick happend !!! and salem wacked up and it was a dream !!!!!
Mohammad sameer
nice but you have grammar mistakes like : there was two car ‘ there were two cars’ , ahmed have a big car and ali have a small car ‘ ahmed has a big car and ali has a small car ‘ ,, they was racing ‘ they were racing ‘ ,, hi ; he ‘ ,, whtat is front him then he crash aboy then he go to gail ‘ what is infront of him then he crashed into a boy then he went to jail ‘
majid and abdullah
good but be careful with the spelling and grammar mistakes like : was ‘ were ‘ ,, an ‘ a ‘ ,, direaction ‘ direction’ ,, and the last sentence is all wrong and i cant understand it
salem hassan
write the story again seriously
hazza adle
write it again
abdullah alhamed
check your grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes and re-write it again
ateeq alqamzi
you have alot of grammar and spelling mistakes
abdulaziz and mohammad
Thank you but you have a lot of mistakes
rewrite it again because you have alot of grammar and spelling mistakes
mohammad samee
I cant understand it
osama zeid
well done but you have grammar and spelling mistakes
ahmad alobaidi
well done but you have spelling and grammar mistakes
you have alot of grammar and spelling mistakes and it is to short
abdullah talal
dont copy rewrite it again
mohammad khalifa
I cant understand it ,, rewrite it again
ahmed abdullah
well done
mohammad ziad
don’t copy
saeed alsheikh
Don’t copy
hayey hamad
there are alot of grammar mistakes
yousef alaseery
well done
One day , and at night , Harry and Taylor were searching for the treasure , they searched and searched till they felt tired , they decided to sleep and continue i the next day , Taylor told Harry to make thee tent , but for some reason Harry forget the tent , so Taylor said : its okay , but we need to find a place to sleep for this night , they looked every where , till they found a big old hotel , Harry said : lets check there and see if we can sleep there , Taylor agree, so they went to see , when they arrived , they didnot sow any one there , Harry said : anybody here ? , but no one answered him , Taylor said : let us go to any room and sleep , and they really did that , they went to check the room , it was very old room , Harry said : I think I need to go to the bath room , and he went there , when Taylor wanted to close his eyes , he heard a sound of his husband Harry shouting , so he went quickly to see what is happening , when he arrived , he sowed his husband Harry and he was sacred ,so Taylor said : what is happening , Harry answered : I sow a ghost and he told me that I will die , Taylor said : no thing is here it is because you are tired , now lets go and sleep , and they went to sleep , when the arrived , the sow a skeleton in the bed and he was holding a knife , the skeleton chased them ,Taylor escaped , but Harry couldn’t , the skeleton throw the knife to Harry’s head and Harry felt down , but then he heard a sound of Taylor saying wake up its 10:00 , when he waked up , he considered that it was only a night mare
car accident
one day ther was two car was drfting in the stret after ten munite ther are truck coming then he crash the frest car then the scond car then the two man day and the truck turned over then the man day
the end
Mohammad Edhar
Thank you
But care about your spelling please
Hazaa Adel
Very short story
Ahmad Ateq
Thank you Care about punctuation marks
You are so excellent
Sanad Yaser
very well done
Khalid Aldahmani
Good
but it is too short
and please read it if you understand anything
just tell me
Abduyllah Alnaqbi
nice
but you should use the past
Mohamad Alqaishy
Once upon a time
Then you copied again
!!!
Ali Humaid
Please take it seriously
Where is the story
?
Khalifa Alzaabi
Thank you
Mohammad Khori
Where is the story
?
mayed Alotaiba
very well done
but use the past please
ABDELHAKIM ADEL
CHECK YOUR SPELLING PLEASE
Rashed Ahmad
Good
But complete the story
Saif Abdullah
Thank you
but check your spelling
use the past
Mohammad Sameer
You can copy your story in the forums
it will be more suitable
One day there was two friends love drifting .john and jack was racing with some body. Jack was driving. They were in rank one. There were joyful, suddenly there was a big bus. they clash the bus, jack died but john in intensive care.
We should pay attention and accountable to our souls.
Saeed Alromaithi
very well done
thank you
but care about
there were not there was
John and jack were not was
the party
Once upon a time. There was a guy name Mike. He decided to make a party for his 21 year old. After one day in night, the party was actually begun and Mike was not there. The audience was so quires and talking about where is Mike (the host of the party). After 30 minutes, the audience was so angry because they where come for nothing. Then the audience get out. Then suddenly they see Mike hit by a car when he was preparing for the fireworks to surprise the audience. After that, everybody catch the person who kill Mike by the car.
.in the last the person who kill Mike go to the jail
Marwan Khalid
Thank you
You are always the best in here